Okay, let me explain. First of all, last year, I create this song. This
song is called Nick Jonas Girl. Before I talk about the song, I need to
let you know that I am not a Jonas Brothers fan and I think their music
is terrible. Nick Jonas is a horrible singer.
Now, getting back to the song, the reason I made this song is because I created an interesting loop which I can't stop listening to, because it is very catchy and addicting. Pretty hard to explain how I made it, I don't feel like going into great detail. Anyways, It reminds me of my ex-crush Lucy dancing to it since the tune reminds me of Lucy herself and the shuffle beat reminds me of her dancing to it. This is why I made this song, I wasn't trying to make fun of Lucy, I am just expressing what this amazing loop reminds me off.
Also, just to let you know, I do have talent with music and I can play instruments, such as Piano, Guitar and Cello. I also have perfect pitch, I can copy music by ear and recompose them on the piano in a couple of seconds, if not, minuites. However, I do understand that in this world, I am not alone, so there is nothing special about my talents (there might be, but idk).
This is the song:
http://www.jnfzone.com/nihal/music/n...nas%20girl.mp3
I also have a demo version on youtube, but the visual makes people dislike the song and see it how its not supposed to be seen as.
Now, can anyone do me a favour and listen to the link (the whole song) posted on here, then give me a full critique? Please be nice and no insults.
I personally believe I should add more stuff to it and silence the loop at some parts in the song and also make it sound like I am not making fun of anyone, but this is just my critique.
If you guys like, you can look at my article I wrote about Nick Jonas, criticizing him and explaining how much they suck:
http://www.jnfzone.com/nihal/nickjonas.htm
I think this article needs more work as well, just like my song.
Now, getting back to the song, the reason I made this song is because I created an interesting loop which I can't stop listening to, because it is very catchy and addicting. Pretty hard to explain how I made it, I don't feel like going into great detail. Anyways, It reminds me of my ex-crush Lucy dancing to it since the tune reminds me of Lucy herself and the shuffle beat reminds me of her dancing to it. This is why I made this song, I wasn't trying to make fun of Lucy, I am just expressing what this amazing loop reminds me off.
Also, just to let you know, I do have talent with music and I can play instruments, such as Piano, Guitar and Cello. I also have perfect pitch, I can copy music by ear and recompose them on the piano in a couple of seconds, if not, minuites. However, I do understand that in this world, I am not alone, so there is nothing special about my talents (there might be, but idk).
This is the song:
http://www.jnfzone.com/nihal/music/n...nas%20girl.mp3
I also have a demo version on youtube, but the visual makes people dislike the song and see it how its not supposed to be seen as.
Now, can anyone do me a favour and listen to the link (the whole song) posted on here, then give me a full critique? Please be nice and no insults.
I personally believe I should add more stuff to it and silence the loop at some parts in the song and also make it sound like I am not making fun of anyone, but this is just my critique.
If you guys like, you can look at my article I wrote about Nick Jonas, criticizing him and explaining how much they suck:
http://www.jnfzone.com/nihal/nickjonas.htm
I think this article needs more work as well, just like my song.
